FYI: I made some retcons in Pirate Rage. So, you might notice them... once they get uploaded I mean. Minor bits here and there, and 1 thing probably everyone tripped over.
Also, as I mentioned in the comments, I just uploaded Retribution to Goodlifeguide.com. However they are backlogged, so I am not certain when I'll get it back.
On to the snippet! This is taking up in chapter 2 where the last snippet left off.
"Are they serious?" D'angelo demanded,
eyes wide. "Who the hell do they think they are?"
"Are they ours?" Captain Bellerose
demanded as she came onto the bridge. "You didn't respond, did you?"
The pilot shook his head vehemently no. He knew
better; she'd have his balls if he'd had. "No, ma'am. We've had an automated
IFF challenge, but we ignored it per your orders. This is from another ship
though. It's too far out for our sensors to see it though," he reported
with a grimace.
"A trader?" the captain asked as she took
her seat. She grimaced as she took a look at her side monitor and then the
plot. D'angelo was right; they had crappy civilian grade sensors so damn myopic
they were nearly useless in a situation like the one they were finding
themselves in.
She was a Horathian. Sure they were in a freighter,
but her people were the hunters not the prey. Being interrogated set her on
edge and her excess arrogance made her fume.
"No, ma'am," the rating replied carefully.
He glanced at the others and then replayed the message.
The captain frowned as she listened. The inflection
meant it wasn't human. There was a slight buzz that meant it was Veraxin or
T'clock. That didn't make sense. Nor did what they said. federation? As if! The
ship though … "Descartes," she murmured thoughtfully. She
wracked her brain but nothing came up. "I don't recognize the name. You
ran the war book?" She turned to the pilot turned bridge rating.
"Yes, ma’am, but its fifteen years out of
date." He shook his head.
"Size?"
"Based on what comm picked up, they are talking
to someone else. That means two ships, ma'am. They are still on the outer edge
of our sensor envelope. Based on their speed, they appear to be too small to be
tramp freighters. And well, the order to heave to …," the rating shrugged
and pointed helplessly to the plot. "I think they've plotted an intercept
course, ma'am. They'll link up with us short of the planetary orbit," he
said.
"Damn it," she muttered, shaking her head.
"Horath …"
"Fresh challenge coming in, ma'am. They are …
transmitting their authority? It says they are a pair of warships of the
federation, ma'am," Oswald said, turning and looking at the captain with
wide frightened eyes. "What the hell, ma'am?"
"Did we just fly into some sort of other
dimension?" the captain muttered. "Someone figure out what the hell
is going on. Is this a prank?"
"I've been monitoring transmissions from the
planet, ma'am. There is chatter about the federation. I can filter for
it," Oswald said. He nervously licked his lips, his Adam's apple bobbing
in fear.
"Do so. Meanwhile, Angel, plot a course away
from the planet and to the ET jump point."
"Ma'am?"
"You heard me. No way in hell am I going to
allow us to be tamely boarded, if they are ours or anyone else's. No, this is
fishy."
"Yes, ma'am." He frowned and pecked at his
station for a few moments. When she cleared her throat, he realized he'd
stalled long enough and looked up. "Course plotted."
"Then execute it. Minimum burn, let's see if
they react. How they react I mean," she said. He nodded and fed the course
change to the helm.
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"They changed course. They are running to the
ET jump point," R'll reported an hour later.
"You can run but you can't hide. No
response?" Captain Levinson demanded.
"No, sir."
"I know; I know you would have reported if
there was one. Did they contact the planet?"
"No, sir. Not that we are aware. The geometry
is off for us to pick up any signal traffic though."
"Query the planet. Maybe they think we're
pirates or something."
"Aye aye, sir."
"Meanwhile," the captain said as he tapped
at the computer. The plot shifted. "Helm, come to course 331 mark 31 and
increase speed to one-half impulse. Comm, signal Loch to follow suit and
stay on our flank."
"Issuing the order before the comm
signal?" his XO and chief engineer asked from his repeater panel.
"Something up, Skip?"
"I want to see if Troy's people are paying
attention," the captain replied with a mild shrug. The XO snorted.
"I'm headed to dinner. Keep me posted of any changes," the captain
said as he exited the hot seat.
"Aye, sir. R'll has the bridge," the Veraxin
said. By now the rating was used to being dumped in the watch. She was watch
qualified as was everyone else on the ship. She was even considering mustanging
to officer when they got back to civilization—if they got back. From the look
of it, it wouldn't be anytime soon apparently.
:::{)(}:::
Will you be going over the older books and posting updated copies so the story flows well?
ReplyDeleteThe first 7 books have yet to be edited and reformatted. It costs $$$$ to do each so I am only doing 1 a year when I have the extra cash to do it. I'll most likely make minor changes and updates to them when I do.
DeleteBTW, Retribution has been signed up for pre-order. But in order to fit Goodlife's schedule I had to push it out to the 31st. I don't know if they will let me publish it earlier. Hopefully.
This is an experiment. If it becomes too much of a hassle I will not do it again.
I preordered my copy, I hope it works out. Have you let the folks on Facebook know about the preorder?
ReplyDeleteNevermind they know now.
ReplyDeleteCool!
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