Sunday, July 28, 2013

Woot Woot!

Finally! After a couple months of work I have just finished the first rough cut of Jethro 2 First to Fight! YES!
It wasn't easy writing about a cat with a certain feline "helper" of my very own.
(yes I know it's horrid picture, the lighting is low and what can I say? My camera phone is only 2meg)
Now I have a few things to tidy up before I can pass it on to Thomas, Gord, Jacob, and the other guys. :)

1: I need to finish adding my notes. I've got 2 and a half pages (front and back) of notes to add. Some of them are from Thomas who related to me stories of when he was in the corps. :)
Problem:
A certain furrball has a thing for paper and pens. He loves sitting on them and holding them hostage.
(Yes that's a roll of TP in the corner. Don't ask.)

2: I've got a bit of light reading ahead of me, I want to add a few more things to the book. A little um... more detail?
I've already been pecking at the NCO guide and the Light infantry guide. The Making starships and Stargates was a little disappointing. I've got some notes in the Energy weapons book. The alien book I skimmed twice but I have my own aliens really. :)

3: I've got a consistency edit to do. I need to make sure I've got the names of people, places, and things right, plus the names of weapons, tech, and what not within shouting distance of what I had before. Always fun.

4: I do a quick editing pass of my own, first with a spell check, then mostly with 'Find', looking for the usual culprits.

5: Add the Appendix, Author's Afterward, and clean up the other stuff. Oh, and add another sneak peek. :)

Then I can pass it on to the guys and turn my attention to the cover art....
That is if a certain someone will let me. lol

I am hoping I'll have this all done and off to Thomas by the first, but don't quote me! lol The family is out of school and making plans for the next week. I am playing things by ear. Then there are the birthdays... sigh

Still, I am a bit giddy and in an awesome mood. YEAH!



10 comments:

  1. Great, so very much looking forward to this one.
    And to hear some roundabout news of the fleet admiral :)

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  2. Lol
    A lot more is going on than just Irons. You'll see. The times, they are a changing!
    I'm past the first round of notes and into step 2. That's going to take some time so I might skip to step 3 or 4 off and on. :)

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  3. Ah :) Sounds like great news to me.
    Irons really deserves to see some result's from his work...
    Running into a small scout ship perhaps with news from the base?
    Really looking forward to next installment of Jethro now :)

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  4. Oh a lot is going on in Jethro 2!
    Let's just say all the threads are starting to come together. :)
    I just got pages of notes from 6 of the books, I'm going to try to implement them and changes today.

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  5. O'h Jolly :)
    That did nothing to relax me since Jethro 2 is not out yet... :)
    I am amazed with your outline, and the amount of details in the books :)
    Keep it up

    Cheers

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  6. Thanks. I'm busy trying to stuff as much detail, and correct some details as I can. I finished taking notes from 6 books Monday, I added 4 out of 6 today, plus another scene snippet I came up with. Hopefully I can get things wrapped up in the next 2 days. I may not make my self imposed deadline, but hopefully I get closer this time.

    Jethro 2 should be a bit more fun. Or at least interesting. A deeper look into the evolution of military life for some, more tech toys to play with, new faces, old friends,... um...but well... okay, no, can't go there, Rick might strangle me. Or at least try to. :D

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  7. Well, I passed Jethro 2 on to Thomas yesterday! The ball has started rolling!

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  8. Thomas gave it a thumbs up. I passed it on to Gord. :)
    One thing Thomas pointed out is I need to stop working on book 6 along with the cover to Jethro 2 to focus on the last 2 short stories since all 13 shorts fill in a lot of the blanks for the past 3 books and upcoming 2 books. :)

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